Your work does have some detail, but I would like you to revisit the DISTINCT approach we discussed when looking at the conventions of horror. If you go through and apply this throughout you will have more detail to your work.
You MUST also embed the film opening and a variety of screen shots throughout your work. This would lift your work out of the level 2 it is currently sitting in.
- Your images need to be JPEG's - at the moment they are not showing up. Talk to me about how you can fix this.
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